hoi-theguy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bridge Fight]

Coming from an animation stand point this is terrible, there are many MANY things you need to drastically improve. First of all your anatomy needs some serious improving, the preportions are all over the place, I recommend going on devient art and finding some tutorials. Secondly the tweenimation makes me cringe when looking at it, the terrible walk cycle and moving symbols are just ugly. There many things that need to be improved, The voice acting wasn't terrible but it wasn't really good either. I am not trying to rag on you or anything, I am criticizing you so you can become better. I have seen your old stuff and you have improved a lot but there is still a long way to go. Also don't use gradients when coloring.

bocodamondo responds:

First: watch out befor you talk: i allready have an DA account and its 2 years old AND ACTIVE http://bocodamondo.deviantart.com

Second: there was only 3 oder 4 tweens and ENTIRE rest FBF and you guys still directly fall into those little ones??! watch my last flash "Dora vS SWIPER" wich is ONLY tweens! to know how terrible it really is and besides thers a billion populare artitst who DOING ONLY twenns.. like the creator of madness serie. and nobody complains about them if there have to much tweens

Third: ok i know you trying to critize me! and its fine i accept it. but first you have to know all infos before you ends up with a useless review wich i allready have all solutions for it

im just saiyn :C

[Santa Travel]

amazing

this is by far my favorite christmas animation, very well animated and very funny

Hulalaoo responds:

Sure, i am skilled

[Ccao Vs Cacu]

pretty good

the animation was very fluent, the only thing I would suggest besides more detail into the characters is the improve on the audio, it sounds very butchered.

lunesporlamadrugada responds:

thanks for the criticism, if it is, the sound is crap, not as improved quality, the sound is really good quality but when imported into Flash sounds crappy, I'm looking for some tutorials to fix this, regards.