The styles you made for the members of Sleepycast were very fitting, and your comedic timing with the animation was spot on.
Really good, I didnt expect you to make something like this but it was a pleasent surprise.
Great stuff, keep it up.
Stamper was the only thing I found entertaining, everything else felt like forced humor.
@ EpicFailKid then what is the fucking point of reviews, reviews are to tell the creator what you liked and what you didnt like but most of all what they need to improve on. Everyone needs to improve on something. When someone is being heavily critical its not because they "hate" them its because they see potential and they want they to grasp that potential. So if you don't want KawaiiPiranha to get better that is fine with me.
I agree. I don't mind reviews that tell me how to improve. I DO mind reviews that tell me I suck and that I have no quality work though.
the fuck does =y mean?
Coming from an animation stand point this is terrible, there are many MANY things you need to drastically improve. First of all your anatomy needs some serious improving, the preportions are all over the place, I recommend going on devient art and finding some tutorials. Secondly the tweenimation makes me cringe when looking at it, the terrible walk cycle and moving symbols are just ugly. There many things that need to be improved, The voice acting wasn't terrible but it wasn't really good either. I am not trying to rag on you or anything, I am criticizing you so you can become better. I have seen your old stuff and you have improved a lot but there is still a long way to go. Also don't use gradients when coloring.
First: watch out befor you talk: i allready have an DA account and its 2 years old AND ACTIVE http://bocodamondo.deviantart.com
Second: there was only 3 oder 4 tweens and ENTIRE rest FBF and you guys still directly fall into those little ones??! watch my last flash "Dora vS SWIPER" wich is ONLY tweens! to know how terrible it really is and besides thers a billion populare artitst who DOING ONLY twenns.. like the creator of madness serie. and nobody complains about them if there have to much tweens
Third: ok i know you trying to critize me! and its fine i accept it. but first you have to know all infos before you ends up with a useless review wich i allready have all solutions for it
im just saiyn :C
don't you know every style is Egoraptor style
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